Well done for making such a great start to this years' SLJ programme, "Changemakers: People who have changed the world" - thanks for writing this awesome poem about Neil Armstrong and his experiences when walking on the moon.
I'm really impressed with the words that you've picked to rhyme with, did Neil actually leave his home in June? Are you able to tell me what you mean by "sometimes it can be a real calamity, looking down at the human race"?
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Kellan
ReplyDeleteWell done for making such a great start to this years' SLJ programme, "Changemakers: People who have changed the world" - thanks for writing this awesome poem about Neil Armstrong and his experiences when walking on the moon.
I'm really impressed with the words that you've picked to rhyme with, did Neil actually leave his home in June? Are you able to tell me what you mean by "sometimes it can be a real calamity, looking down at the human race"?
Great work, Kellan!
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Jordan